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o2l2
2007-11-18
ch 1,
abuseThat was powerfull, you have deffinately acchived favorite authourship. I hate to write pointless reviews because they dont help you, so...
it should be categorised under poetry,
Check your punctuation. some semicolons, should be commas
burning in effigy
2006-04-15
ch 1,
abuse"The fear of failure?/Or the fear of success?" my favorite line

wow...
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