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| o2l2 2007-11-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was powerfull, you have deffinately acchived favorite authourship. I hate to write pointless reviews because they dont help you, so... it should be categorised under poetry, Check your punctuation. some semicolons, should be commas |
| burning in effigy 2006-04-15 ch 1, | abuse"The fear of failure?/Or the fear of success?" my favorite line wow... |