Nice. It didn't fail to deliver what was promised: Angst. I'm often dissapointed through a writers inability to express raw feeling, but this is lovely. Well done. :]

Wow... beautifully expressed. I like the third paragraph; "I am me, because of you. And for you, I am not myself." That part is just perfect... Amazing job!

Cassandra

You have just managed to acheive what I have never managed to do- effectively demonstrate that feeling of despair.

nice. very angsty. i like it(: the last line especially appealed to me. "Will I ever be free?"

can't wait to catch more of your works.