Don't think I have ever read anything quite like this. Well thought out piece. Awesome write.

I love writing about porcelain. I just... yeah I can really really really relate. Most people think porcelain is just creepy (and I do, too) but I think it also has a lot of symbolism. It comes up all (all all all all) the time in my writing (most of it I don't post, though) and so I feel like I know exactly what you're talking (haha or writing) about. I love finding people on fictionpress that are easy to relate to.

Hauntingly well done. This creates a startlingly vivid image for a haiku. Excellent work.

you really have captured the beauty and the blankness of a porcelain doll with just enough words...very good job on this...i have reflections of this poem in my pieces "flawed perfection" and "pink blushons and piano dreams"...pls do check them out...

truly yours...

i love the last line cause it's so true and almost symbolic. nice work.

Very, very nice haiku. It's hard to write a good one of those, and you pulled it off spectacularly! )