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| the-foresight 2006-08-20 ch 1,  | abuse"I sound so emo,But no, really I like my wristsJust the way they are" That is a great line, made me laugh, I really liked it, very heartfelt and not too overly gothic or emo as you put it. Thanks for reviewing maps, though the thing is I never intended to do any more, I just wanted to capture the emotion of the song. But at some point I may write more. As soon as I work out how to do chapters on this site! |
| toxic-noodle725 2006-04-27 ch 1, | abuseoh thats sad. this poem was real emotional. i liked it. good job! |