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| sreddi 2006-07-23 ch 1, anon. | abusea quality poem but i am confused as to whether u r the right person to write this. As in sure u may be down but i figured that a loner, e.g old V. might have written this. If this is how u really feel never forget u r never alone when u have an indian for a friend |
| Raynboww 2006-07-20 ch 1,  | abuseThis is how I felt through most of my teenage years... Nobody wanting me to do anything with them... But I sense this hopefulness that one day you will be excepted... And that's how I felt... Good poem I love it! |
| mizu no kokoro 2006-04-26 ch 1, | abuseVery emotional, well expressed. good work keep writing! |
| BeholderOfImagination 2006-04-18 ch 1, | abuseOk this is one I feel I can relate to. Sad smiles, but smiles nonetheless. Its good. |
| Olivine 2006-04-17 ch 1, | abuseanother good one, lol. somehow, i really liked the line "all real. tinged with fake" awesome. keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-:|:- |