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| Orual 2006-11-02 ch 1,   | Well, this is certainly a refreshing change from the usual love poetry. I always appreciate honesty in poetry, and this seems very honest, especially with the dedication at the end. I really like the theme of knowing what will happen to a relatinship just as it gets started; I've been in that position many of times. Your rhythm was quite nice, also. Choppy at points, but it was a good choppy. Good poem, methinks. |
| simply meg 2006-04-16 ch 1, | What's wrong with being in love? Although your poem does have a point. One of the best I've read in a long time, nice job! Write On! |