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Reviews For: Last Night I Dreamt

Rhianika
2006-04-16
ch 1,
abuseAww, thats so sad. It finishes on a really hopeful note so thats nice. I like how you formatted it with little three line stanzas and the repetition was really nice too. Great job.

Keep writing

~Rhia
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