Wow, very powerful. I totally have dreams like that. They're so scary! *shudders*. I like this a lot! Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^

Intense! Reminds me in a way of River from Firefly. Can't explain why (maybe its just cuz I find connections to Firefly in everything! =P) but yeah... Its very intense and intriguing. Would've made for an interesting dream!

great poem, lovely imagry (i cant spell, it's summer) -azarathangel aka ash from fanfic

woah, creepy dream! i should write about my dreams...