I like the surrel touches here. It is simple and frankly expressed. I like your style in poetry writing.

This was gorgeous in its brevity, simplicity, and expression. You are a true artist with words.

T_Tit's been awhile. But this is so pretty. I loved so many of these lines..."sunkissed heart" was great. I really liked the last two lines, it was a really good ending.

I really loved the last two lines. They are so true. Beautiful job.

Loved this; it was an amazing ride through the emotions of love. Your style is so striking and delicate.

Juliet.

This has a marvelous sound and movement to it. I like how the short lines speed up the flow and rush everything together. Well done.

damn, that ending is a killer, and so pretty

cute rhythm. i always love that, it's charming. marvelous.

This is great!

!~XoXo~!

you make me so proud. *katie holmes teeth baring smile*

'sunkissed heart' that's just so sweat... like a summer romance. '-so very fast' the '-' expresses so much. great job with this one. i love how the stanzas are short. nice divisions. and you described the moon well in the beginning, or moreso, her actions.

I've been reading your poems ever since but didn't bother reviewing, so simple but really holds so many images, the poem feels so rushed, but in a good way. Good job

i love this - flows so well, and i really like the rhyming parts. nice structure, too. great job.

Gorgeous!

beautiful. it's rushed, but in such a good way. the end made me so so sad. ~*