Wonderful!

You are regularly great at poetry!

Hmm, after reading your other reviews, I feel like a cynic, but here goes. I can't say I'm a fan of this poem. I was intrigued by the title and got my hopes up. The rhyme pattern seemed to make the rhymes slightly stressed and it didn't seem to flow well. It also seemed somewhat repetitive. Ignore me if you can't use any of this critiquing because I can see all I did was point out what I found fault in and didn't give you any alternatives that I found appealing.

-J.A.

I've used this rhyming scheme in a piece I wrote (not posted yet). I think it works.I like the title. I understand what you're saying. Good read.

Let's just say ur experiment was a success! THat was AwEsOmE!

You have something in your writing that I just love. Keep it up and never give up.