"and/maybe i am meant to be broken inside."

that last sentence is so beautiful. it's the perfect ending to such a powerful piece.

I must say I love your work, parentheses and all. And this... there's a lot of emotion in this. It connects.

love the way the lines finish in the middle of a sentence, and the bracketed words really get the pain out well,holding a deeper meaning to the open ones. The last two lines are fantastic as well.

_beXie_

O, I know the feeling. It can be hard keeping promises, the last to lines are great.

The ending really makes the poem. Great job.