|Reviews for i made a promise|
| a silenced revolution 12/19/07 . chapter 1
"and/maybe i am meant to be broken inside."
that last sentence is so beautiful. it's the perfect ending to such a powerful piece.
| cardiolysis 4/22/06 . chapter 1
I must say I love your work, parentheses and all. And this... there's a lot of emotion in this. It connects.
| polka dots and addictions 4/19/06 . chapter 1
love the way the lines finish in the middle of a sentence, and the bracketed words really get the pain out well,holding a deeper meaning to the open ones. The last two lines are fantastic as well.
| Annaece's Forsaken Corpse 4/17/06 . chapter 1
O, I know the feeling. It can be hard keeping promises, the last to lines are great.
| randompoetry 4/16/06 . chapter 1
The ending really makes the poem. Great job.