cool!
now...who is this again?
Aurelia Valiandessa?
but it's a good start, I'm excited to read wat's next ^.^

Oh? Auri? I recognize this character. Interesting first chapter - I take this as the frontier breakthrough into psymantics (as well as the foremost case of dragon-bonding)?

It's shaping out to be another fabulously witty work of yours.

Looking forward to more updates.

~Jessica

OMG OMG OMG!1do you remember me?! maybe not, but i used to chat online with you. onwards.. to more important things...

o0o0o0o0... what happenes NEXT?!!?when are you going to update?! I LIKE IT ALLREADY! it's from the world of ... of well... what would you call your world of TAD?! AH SEND YOUR TAD TO A PUBLISHER ALLREADY!! there are people out there who want to write a fanfiction about it... *-* i love your stories... ha ha ha i wrote a paper on TAD and my teacher was like o0o0o.. this sound interesting! I ALSO GOT AN A! yay! usually she thinks my writeing is weird... I REALLY LOVE IT!! CAN'T WAIT TIL YOU UPDATE!

Hiyo. First chapter is awesome so far... Got the author alert some time ago but was afraid to actually read your story for fear of getting distracted from my study and homework time. Ok. Maybe not study and homework time. Maybe sleeping time. Uhm. Right. So anyway, it's a great beginning. Hope you update soon. Like real soon. Like UPS soon. Ok, maybe NOT UPS soon. Maybe.. lightning-soon? No, it would be lightning-fast then. And a little impossible. Quick as in... some really fast and awesome author that updates really soon. Gosh, I'm so articulate. Nyah! XD

Very good. I was going to comment on how it was kind of hard to follow, but there are breaks inserted now so I guess you beat it to me. FP can be terrible with formatting... And I'm rambling.

Nothing significantly bad caught my eye, so yay for you. If Auri's who I think she is (I haven't checked) I can kind of see echoes of her TotW-self with her TAD-self. Another yay!

A few thoughts... if you're going to expand on the dragons, maybe you could expand on the color-changing eyes and their significance/rarity?

Oh, and Jaegar was my third favorite character, after Jerik and Asa/Tai. I love snark. :)

Well.. I don't know how you do it.. but it seems that you've again managed something that will be amazing. I applaud you - I wish I could write this well.. Ah.. I'll just have to watch from the sidelines as you gain fame and glory and I admire you.

..And that sounded creepy. I swear it wasn't meant to sound that way. Ah well.

I'm very curious as to how you'll make this Auri into the Auri in the last chapter of TAD.. You'll pull it off, I'm sure, I just kind of.. don't want to wait. Hahah..

It was rather funny, actually. My friend and I went all through TAD trying to find references to Auri, and we only found two.. that weren't very enlightening. So, we gave up, and decided to see what you do with this story.

The random bouts of humor you sprinkled throughout the chapter really made it fun to read, and I’m pretty sure that I’ll end up falling in love with Auri and any other characters you introduce – just like I fell in love with all the characters in TAD. Except Jaegar; I’m glad he exploded. ::coughs and shifts eyes:: Moving along..

All in all (now that this is really long), I give you two thumbs up! And, if I had one, I'd give you a cookie, also.

Also, I know you hate this, but I have to say it; throughout all the college life and your lack of time, please try your best to update soon! I'll, along with all your other readers will be waiting! ^_^

-Chisu (Think you might be able to e-mail me if life decides you're worthy enough of a break? Just wondering. XD)

P.S. I'm so excited! =D ::laughs and walks away::

i love how you have created this new world and all of your stories take place there. its really cool. i'm not as creative, or smart as you to do that. to write about all these things you have to have at least a basic knowledge of all this doctor, insanity, stuff. if youre just making it all up its really good. very believable. cant wait for more.

Winter

Very good stuff, enjoying it so far please make more.

(Also please review my submissions especialy Haven my SCI-FI project)

O.O

And yet again I am reminded of your incredible ability to spin sci-fi with an addictive twist not unlike ice cream or crack.

I love how you've taken a part of TaD history and made it into its own universe, with a character I can't wait to read more of and a plot where you can see the future through an ivory haze--and it is beautiful.

I'm sorry, most of this is probably fever-induced babbling, but the sentiment is sincere. I have always loved your writing, and will wait with bated breath until you update this story.

--Kohikari*

P.S. (the fangirl side comes out of the foggy fever shell)Gya! IloveitIloveitIloveit! Please update within the next month or so--it's as beautiful as TaD! =@_@=