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Reviews For: Unspoken Love For Someone Who Can Not Know

psychodramagirl
2008-07-25
ch 1,
abuseWow... this is so me... Like this is pretty much the last nineteen months of my life in a few hundred words... that's almost scary... Anywho, enough of my tedious life, onto your writing. Great job, I must say, so keep on writing :D
sasuke-naruto-forever
2007-06-28
ch 1,
abusei know exactly what this is talking about except it is a guy that was my bestest friend. And for the longest time i never told him that i liked him but i finally did. i'm just glad we are still friends though we aren't as close as we were before...
dot-sye
2007-03-17
ch 1,
abuseoh god
i loved it
that was like... wow... beyond wow
honestly... i really liked this story!
may i ask what inspired it?
justaguy
2006-04-19
ch 1,
abuseIt is going to take me a minute to respond to this. I am having a hard time seeing through the tears. Honest, I have to stop and clear the tears away so that I can see what I am typing. In a way, I live this. I have lived this, and I will live this.

I am sure that a lot of us live this, and some of us just do not admit it.

Do not feel sorry that I am crying. it is okay. You just touched something deep inside of me. I thought that it was buried, but it rushed to the surface and made tears come to my eyes.

I am not fem, or talk fem, or act fem, or walk fem or anything fem. I am a guy that has feelings and emotions and a heart and a deep deep sense of caring.

Damn, I keep trying to excuse why I am touched so deeply by what you wrote. I have no need to excuse it. You touched me. You moved me. You made me feel something that I needed to feel, again.

I am going to just sit here for a few minutes and wash my eyes with my tears. I think that there is some dust in there somewhere. Yea...that is it. Spring cleaning and I have to dust.

(Smile) You are awesome! What can I say?
Sefyroth
2006-04-16
ch 1,
abuseReally nice. I can relate to what you write, and it's beautifuly done. Keep writing!

Sefyroth
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