Aw! This is so adorably sweet and I absolutely loved it.

Aw! So cute. Especially because it was all dialog. :)

Great writing - especially as it didn't get confusing as it usually does in stories of this kind.

Maybe you should do a sequel? I kind of wanted to see hwhat he does after she says that. LOl.

Ri

Yes you definitely can write comedies. I thoroughly enjoyed this, thanks!

I read this story a couple months ago and i loved it.
And then I searched it (took me a couple tries) and then I found it.

Yeah. That's my little story.

So I really like this. It made me laugh a lot :D

Cute story. Nice work.

Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have an excellent day.

~Twilight Starr~

Aw! He's so worked up over being the comic relief guy when she suddenly goes "I love the comic relief guy." You know what, I think I do too. Why take Mr. Smooth-Yet-More-Dramatic-Than-A-Typical-Cheerleader when I can have Mr. Always-Smiling-And-Advising?

GREAT JOB!

AH. I LOVE IT. LOVE IT. LOVE IT. I ABSOLUTELY POSITIVELY LOVE IT! -goes to read other stories-

So cute! I always wish the girl ends up with the comic relief guy, because at least in movies (and sometimes even in books) the comic relief guy has WAY more personality than the leading male, because he's usually to focused on being, like... pretty. And stuff. :)

-Sally Can Wait :D

Lol! That was so adorable! Very "aww" worthy. I loved it, it was hilarious. That ending line was absolutely perfect. lol. Good work! I love your sense of humor! :D Onto read your other stories...~Kaitlin

that is worthy of an "aw"

jaja i

Oh Lordy, I LOVED this. It definitely had me laughing. It's the sort of stuff my friends and I used to do at school. And you've worked in writing only in dialogue very well. I've been told you need description too much, so I can't write too much dialogue without some sort of descriptive break.

Great stuff. :)

“Me! Ok? Me. I love the comic relief guy.”

:: bursts into tears ::

Forgive my teenage hormones...sometimes they get a bit carried away...

This is so cute. So cute. I'm running out of vocabularly to describe it. Amazingly cute. It's one of those moments in time that is best frozen. It doesn't matter what happened afterwards...because of what is happening now. I just have this image in my head of Kath blurting it out, and Jason's face...aww man. This has made my day.

This is so funny and so cute! I love it!

The whole idea is really funny - (Brilliant irony btw, he IS the comic relief guy *Dies laughing*) - and it's just so cute it's unbelievable.

Love the last line. Keep writing!

I loved how this is all written in dialogue and it's very cute and funny! That last line was lovely! Oh God and I know all about those quiz thingies, I've actually made a few on selectsmart because I am that cool lol. Comic relief guys are the best too! Kronk, need I say more? '“I hate you.”' lol I loved that bit - in fact the whole thing was great and original too. 'How do you know? We could be in something like the Truman Show, our every move recorded on a camera, our every conversation taped, the whole of the world could be watching us!' *cue my paranoia*. Oh yeah and I read your profile, dahling it's all about the geminaurus on-the-cuspy types lol.