This is incredibly cute, and I like the combination of the different aspects of the various fairytales.

At the beginning I wanted to say that Owen was the prince. But when she turned into a frog and he didn't give himself up, it made me doubt my assumption. Shucks.

Hiya,
I've been reading your story for the past 2 days and I'm very much enjoying it :) Sorry I didn't review earlier, I was using Wii internet and it would've taken me several hours to just right a bloody sentence!
But anyway, I hope you upload soon!
Fairytales RULE!

I'm sorry to say I've read up until here and haven't reviewed. So here it is! I'm really enjoying it so far, and hope the suprises never run out. :D

haha love this story! love it! I have a theory. That the prince is actually Owen and the only reason he didn't kiss Talia is because he didn't want Tobin or anyone else (as he happened to be by the dragon or gypsies or what not at some points) to know he was the prince. because obviously he's trying to run away and what good would it do if he gave away his secret? tehe and if I'm wrong... well then... I've got a very bad theory on my hands. lol can't wait for the next chapter! :D

Hiya, I normally review at the last chapter posted, but I couldn't help but notice a tiny mistake you made which I just have to point out (I'm a Nazi). You wrote(typed) “J’ai Suis desolee, Mademoiselle”, where it should be “Je suis desolee, mademoiselle”. Basically, j'ai means 'I have' and suis means 'am' and you put caps where it wasn't necessary. Technically it's 'désolée' but even I stuff up my accents sometimes.

cat :)

"J’ai Suis desolee, Mademoiselle."

This story is great so far, just thought to let you know that it's Je suis desolee (accent included of course). I'm french, so i couldn't resist pointing out that tiny little mistake ^^

I have this suspicion that Owen is the prince- am i wrong to think that? I've had that suspicion since chapter 6, when Talia makes up that excuse of finding the "prince" and he acts all pissed off and says, "so you want to marry him, do you?"

Or it could just mean Owen really is a vagrant and he's just jealous.

Really like how you interwove minor details from Cinderella and Repunzel (kind of) into the story. Great job! Bonne chance avec votre histoire!

Argh!
I love this.
ANd i love Talia- shes like
a genius charector-
:)
Rapunzul now is it ?
I hope the story is finished :]

lol,
i can imagine that -
love how she keeps running away
LMAO at snuffles

Shit,man that sucks.
Is that even legal? To sell
stepdaughters?
Argh i hate this fuckin woman
and this story isn't even real

O
Whats goin on?
I love cinderella but the only part i hate
from the story is the cruelty shown to her by
her stepfamily, if it were me i'd have ruin away.

Hey that was pretty easy
the guy in the barn is obviously
the prince-
am i right?
Still, cool to find out how they fall in love :)

Nice Start!
Bit like the Cinderella plotline though?

I really enjoy reading your story. I love how you bring in aspects from other fairy tales, but everything goes all wrong. Your story is really funny, and very well written. I find it very refreshing and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Wow, this is one of the most entertaining and refeshing fairytales I've read in a long time. I'm wondering if I'm right in guessing who the prince is...but I'll wait.

However. The last update was in March? I hope that just means you've been suffering from writer's block, and now, in December, you'll miraculously recover and give us another chapter?

:)

Anywho, continue this please! Don't listen to what idiots out there are saying about plagiarism. This is definitely not plagiarism and it is definitely something you shouldn't abandon.

hey i love this story, please update soon!!