|Reviews for Chasing Princes|
| Wyvernwings 10/7/06 . chapter 7
Hehe I like this story. It reminds me alot of Ella Enchanted and Ever After though. The charaters and the way it moves seems to be similar to them. Still this is a very good story. I like it! :D
| fearlessgoddess2 10/7/06 . chapter 1
This is pretty good for a beginning! There are some gramattical errors but as you gain experience correctness (is that a word?) will come naturally. Anyway it's a cool plotline, but not really my type. I'm going to see what else you've written.
| Guest 10/7/06 . chapter 1
Ha, so very good! Love it! Very good details.
| Never-Ending Sarcasm 10/6/06 . chapter 4
Ooh, me likes your story so far! Poor Talia...can I punch Madame Belay, please? And Penelope and Margareet? I am definitely hooked now :)
And thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked...my sense of humor is usually lost on people :)And as for Shane's last name...I think I thought about giving him two and never fixed it. my bad.
I will return to read more soon, promise!
| Alfsigesey 10/5/06 . chapter 14
Sweet! Tower escape, I must know more.
| Gwyn Baranof 10/4/06 . chapter 14
Okay, I am a lover of fantasy, but of more the Lord of the Rings kind of stuff as opposed to the Ella Enchanted stuff. Well, as much as I loved Ella Enchanted and the fairy-taleish stories that I have read, this has changed my mind about them. I am starting to appreciate them more. I heard about you when I was reading The Lady in Black(which I absolutely love). Seeing your name next to Chasing Princes, I just had to read it.I love the creativeness and the completely unique writing. I have some stories with writing like yours, but none were so effective. I love this story. It is not one of those stories that make it where I cannot sit still. It is completely different, making me still wait with anticipation. I want more. It makes me feel so different from other books I have read. It is appealing with its own uniqueness. I do not know how to describe it. The only thing that I thought odd about this was Talia's personality. At the beginning she seemed like...I do not know. Not ditzy or clumsy. Then, of course, she changes dramatically to her special klutzy self. Then in chapter 12 she goes back to the whatever it is that I cannot figure out. That period where she is a klutz is missing something that I just cannot put a finger on. Oh, well. It will come to me eventually, so keep writing. At first, I was debating Owen being the prince, but now I am having second thoughts. I do not want the story spoiled for me. I have this really, really, really, really bad habit of looking and reading ahead in books. And, of course, I always read something that completely gives away the story and crushes me inside. So I like it hear, where there is no way I can do that unless I start a story already well through its course. Anyway, please update soon. I will have to look at this Frogs, Warts, and Kisses. I had looked at it, and not being that kind of reader, discarded it. Oh, well.
| BlueEmerald4 10/4/06 . chapter 14
Kayla! Thanks once again for a glowing review. I'm glad you liked the kissing scene, but you might be a bit disappointed in my characters during the next chapter. But I won't be telling you what happens, that would just ruin the story for you. But I would like to know where you think all of this is headed. Just to see if any of my foreshadowing is getting through to anyone.
And I know I'm not supposed to write what I think is goin to happen in your story, so I won't give my opinion on the "mysterious" guy who just randomly showed up. But if I'm right, can I gloat?
I need to stop reviewing when I'm so so tired. I need some caffeine before I go to work tonight. I hate my school. They give us laptops and the school has wireless, but they blocked almost every website on the internet for absolutely dumb reasons. I was relieved to see that fictionpress was nto one that was blocked. But two weeks into school, they blocked it! I was so pissed, because I do all my writing on this stupid laptop of mine, so how was I supposed to upload anything? ANd you know the most infuriating point of it all? They blocked it because it is a "cultural institution." How lame is that?
Sorry for rambling on and on, and hopefully I will be updating soon. And even more hopefully, you will update soon. See ya later Kayla.
| NHKZ 10/2/06 . chapter 14
Yay! A new chapter! For a moment, I thought he was going to kiss her and say 'can a hallucination do this?' LOL
I have too much imagination :P
Thanks for reviewing my story!
| Kristina Suko 10/2/06 . chapter 14
Hehehe... I love it more and more all the time.
lol, don't you hate it when you realize you're reading something of one of your reviewers and it totally skipped your brain? I do that...
Thanks for reviewing White Rose! I hope you like it D Phantom of the Opera and Beauty and the Beast are my two favorite movies of their kind (musicals and fairytales.)
Yay! More soon? I hope!
D Maranwe Telrunya
| swoas 10/2/06 . chapter 14
lol yei for the update! lol the hallucination sounds cute...ya...i'm weird lol
| Ashley Resten 10/2/06 . chapter 13
In chapter 14. You wrote 'right' instead of write in your author's note. That's all.
| Adaku 10/2/06 . chapter 14
Hopefully, I'll be back sooner than you think. I'm really surprised you still want me to live-aka still be active in FP. I'm happy to say your on your way to 100 reviews on this story. You did nice work on this chapter. I'm not going any farther, because I have work to finsih. Never stop writing. Till next time
| M.R.Sanner 10/2/06 . chapter 14
Awsume ! Freakin awsume chapter ! Seriously it totally rox my sox ! Oh God nice touch with the whole think Im crazy thing ! Lol ,it was so much fun to read !
Oh I've been recomending *sp* to everyone to read this story ! Seriously I tell all my friends ,I posted links on webgroups about this ! Becasue I totally believe you deserve more credit !
Woot , I promise you will get you 100 reviews and more ! Specially after this chapter !
Oh my gosh who is this flirty "luv" guy ? He totally reminds me of some actor ! Hm...who is it that calls everyone luv ? For some strange odd reason I'm thinking Spike from Buffy ! Hahaha ! But I do not believe thats whom I am talking about .
Yay you updated ! So that means I can update ! Woot ! And I even finished the next chapter too ! Yay !
Kayla I really really L-O-V-E this story !
Write on ! ( tehehe thats my new sig. get it ?)
| Valiant McBlack 9/29/06 . chapter 9
Okay, so I went on a rampage and read...two? two and a half stories? I don't know, but I came across Chasing Princes and thought, "I need to read more of this one!" So I read ten chapters...and now my eyes feel like they're going to fall out.
But enough about that!
So a magic mirror huh? I haven't actually read anything else on here yet with a magic mirror! It's something new for me! And I like the idea.
And just so you know, I felt like an idiot reading about the bumbles cause I thought he was serious too...and now that makes me depressed, which I shouldn't be because it's friday and that means I can finally update PPD! lol...It took me forever to understand what Owen meant when he said payback.
I'm such a dope.
| BlueEmerald4 9/27/06 . chapter 4
Kayla! Guess what! I finally finished Soliqua and the Dark Heart! Just keep in mind that it is just the beginning for my favorite little elf. And confuzzledme read Lady in Black! Thanks so much!