Sweet. The perfect word to describe this. Not just sugar sweet, but the bitter sweetness of chocolate, or of the strongest kind of coffee to keep you alive all night long.

Love the rhyme scheme slightly less than I love the imagaes, feelings presented.

wow thats reali kuhl, bit obscuer not sure I get it all but its reali gd, like the ryme alot. i ryme 2, check out mi poems sumtime? this is goin on my faves. xx

nice poem. i enjoyed reading it. nice flow.