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midsummers night scream 2009-09-26 . chapter 1
That was hilarious. I laughed so hard I cried.
ddz008 2009-09-06 . chapter 30
I never reviewed this last chapter and I only discovered it when I saw the first chapter for the sequel (and I didn't remebered how this one had ended). I was expecting that Dave and Nick ended together... but at the same time it was better for them to stay being just friends. Now I'll go to read the sequel
loveistheshortestformofsuicide 2009-07-08 . chapter 26
I probably should've reviewed this before the last chapter but oh well.

I was totally thinking BATHROOM SEX! And then they end up in the gym teachers office. Haha that might be even better than bathroom sex. I don't really mean that in the pervy way it sounds...

Haha after I read the part about Dave 'shooting all over the desk' or however it was worded I was thinking "imagine walking in and finding something like that all over you're desk." ickles?!

Love this story.
loveistheshortestformofsuicide 2009-07-08 . chapter 30
Wow. Great ending. Sort of bittersweet, no?

But, gah (haha my iPod decided to put gay instead of gah)! These fics (er stories? I dunno) are deff becoming my life. Haha I spend all the time that's not taken up by my job laying around my house reading your fics.

I'm waiting for LION to be updated and I still have one other one to read then I'll probably re read LYD again so it makes more sense.

But yeah you're amazing and like I think I said before I don't want the stories to end. (:
Nicky can have kids right? Haha. That might actually be funny. Especially with Josh and Kay being grandpas. And Mai would be an aunt! Haha such a crazy family. :D
loveistheshortestformofsuicide 2009-07-08 . chapter 19
I know this was a few chapters back but I didn't want to stop reading long enough to review it. (: I didn't really understand the part when Nicky came home from school, after he talked to Ashton, and Mai is like screaming and whatnot. I mean why is she doing that? I know Josh said something about her not adjusting well to some things or whatever but it confused me. I dunno though maybe I skipped over something accidentaly.

Anyway, great story. Hehe. I find it funny that Nicky ends up gay as well after years of saying he's not. xD. Poor Nicky nobody believed it. xP

You're amazing. I don't want these stories to end. (:
chickin'SOUP 2009-07-01 . chapter 30
i've never read an ending like this one on fictionpress.

brilliant! and bittersweet. sequel? *__*
runswithvamp 2009-06-27 . chapter 30
perfect ending
Choice 2009-05-31 . chapter 26
Ooh. (: Didn't disappoint.
Choice 2009-05-31 . chapter 25
God, Cokey gets around like some airborne germ.

Yay for upcoming (hopefully) schmex in the bathroom!
Choice 2009-05-31 . chapter 24
Oh no, not Cokey. D:

By the way, where'd you find that name, Cokey? It reminds me of Cola, or some person who does cocaine. o-o
Choice 2009-05-31 . chapter 23
Mai Ling reminded me of my African Grey parrot in this chapter; she had me laughing hysterically for a bit. :P

And phone sex? Woah.

I find the thought of Nicky doing Dave, instead of the other way around, strangely... endearing? Hot? Yeah, something like that.
Choice 2009-05-30 . chapter 17
Dun dun DUN! The truth finally rears its ugly head! (:

I'm sorry I haven't been reviewing all of the chapters; I've been caught up with everything that's going on.
Choice 2009-05-29 . chapter 4
Ashton, you asshole. XD

But yay, because if the accident hadn't happened, then Nicky wouldn't have gotten hot-man-Dave's number!
Choice 2009-05-29 . chapter 3
Is it odd to say that, from the physical description you gave, Dave is a Harry Potter clone? I mean, he doesn't have pure emerald eyes, and I'm sure Harry would never be one to have a manicure on a normal occasion, but... Yeah. I think this is just the product of me reading WAY too many Harry Potter (slash) fan fictions. (:
Choice 2009-05-29 . chapter 2
I don't really blame Nicky for being so harsh; it's kind of offensive for his parents to say that, with an adopted daughter, they'll be a true family. *pats Nicky's head*
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