 midsummers night scream 2009-09-26 . chapter 1That was hilarious. I laughed so hard I cried. |
 ddz008 2009-09-06 . chapter 30I never reviewed this last chapter and I only discovered it when I saw the first chapter for the sequel (and I didn't remebered how this one had ended). I was expecting that Dave and Nick ended together... but at the same time it was better for them to stay being just friends. Now I'll go to read the sequel |
 loveistheshortestformofsuicide 2009-07-08 . chapter 26I probably should've reviewed this before the last chapter but oh well.
I was totally thinking BATHROOM SEX! And then they end up in the gym teachers office. Haha that might be even better than bathroom sex. I don't really mean that in the pervy way it sounds...
Haha after I read the part about Dave 'shooting all over the desk' or however it was worded I was thinking "imagine walking in and finding something like that all over you're desk." ickles?!
Love this story. |
 loveistheshortestformofsuicide 2009-07-08 . chapter 30Wow. Great ending. Sort of bittersweet, no?
But, gah (haha my iPod decided to put gay instead of gah)! These fics (er stories? I dunno) are deff becoming my life. Haha I spend all the time that's not taken up by my job laying around my house reading your fics.
I'm waiting for LION to be updated and I still have one other one to read then I'll probably re read LYD again so it makes more sense.
But yeah you're amazing and like I think I said before I don't want the stories to end. (:
Nicky can have kids right? Haha. That might actually be funny. Especially with Josh and Kay being grandpas. And Mai would be an aunt! Haha such a crazy family. :D |
 loveistheshortestformofsuicide 2009-07-08 . chapter 19I know this was a few chapters back but I didn't want to stop reading long enough to review it. (: I didn't really understand the part when Nicky came home from school, after he talked to Ashton, and Mai is like screaming and whatnot. I mean why is she doing that? I know Josh said something about her not adjusting well to some things or whatever but it confused me. I dunno though maybe I skipped over something accidentaly.
Anyway, great story. Hehe. I find it funny that Nicky ends up gay as well after years of saying he's not. xD. Poor Nicky nobody believed it. xP
You're amazing. I don't want these stories to end. (: |
 chickin'SOUP 2009-07-01 . chapter 30i've never read an ending like this one on fictionpress.
brilliant! and bittersweet. sequel? *__* |
 runswithvamp 2009-06-27 . chapter 30perfect ending |
 Choice 2009-05-31 . chapter 26Ooh. (: Didn't disappoint. |
 Choice 2009-05-31 . chapter 25God, Cokey gets around like some airborne germ.
Yay for upcoming (hopefully) schmex in the bathroom! |
 Choice 2009-05-31 . chapter 24Oh no, not Cokey. D:
By the way, where'd you find that name, Cokey? It reminds me of Cola, or some person who does cocaine. o-o |
 Choice 2009-05-31 . chapter 23Mai Ling reminded me of my African Grey parrot in this chapter; she had me laughing hysterically for a bit. :P
And phone sex? Woah.
I find the thought of Nicky doing Dave, instead of the other way around, strangely... endearing? Hot? Yeah, something like that. |
 Choice 2009-05-30 . chapter 17Dun dun DUN! The truth finally rears its ugly head! (:
I'm sorry I haven't been reviewing all of the chapters; I've been caught up with everything that's going on. |
 Choice 2009-05-29 . chapter 4Ashton, you asshole. XD
But yay, because if the accident hadn't happened, then Nicky wouldn't have gotten hot-man-Dave's number! |
 Choice 2009-05-29 . chapter 3Is it odd to say that, from the physical description you gave, Dave is a Harry Potter clone? I mean, he doesn't have pure emerald eyes, and I'm sure Harry would never be one to have a manicure on a normal occasion, but... Yeah. I think this is just the product of me reading WAY too many Harry Potter (slash) fan fictions. (: |
 Choice 2009-05-29 . chapter 2I don't really blame Nicky for being so harsh; it's kind of offensive for his parents to say that, with an adopted daughter, they'll be a true family. *pats Nicky's head* |