hey! wow wonder how long this has been up and i havnt realised..lol good tho x

I LOVE THIS!!
PLEASE UPDATE!

Interesting...

-Crimson Ara

This is a wonderful you've got here. You've got strong, likable characters, a talent for writing dialogue, and lovely narration. I'm loving this story :) I can't wait for more!

~carm~

Poor Drake! Someone get the vamp a bag of blood! :D We get to see Lucian. I loved that part where he was like "You. Congratulations you've been promoted." it made me laugh. lol. And they want Miranda. Miranda is in the right place at the wrong time, cause any place with Drake is a good place. (hint hint) haha.

It tok me a while to review, but i've been reading this at school, and i finally got enough time to review since school got out yesterday. (thank the lord) Update any of your stories soon. They all got me on the edge of my seat. Gosh Darn. :D

AWESOME story and its sweet that he's falling for Miranda hope you update soon...vassy xoxo

Again awesome chap can't wait to read more >.< and damn you for making it a cliffhanger

Well, I forgive you for the late update in light of the fact that this was a pretty interesting chapter with the introduction of Drake's father... which really only makes me more confused as to what it going on... I really hope you update soon, you have left me with more questions then answers!

As for my sequel to "Forbidden Love" well I know you're not going to like this but it won't be posted for quite some time since I want to rewrite the first one before posting the sequel, since I will be changing a lot of stuff. But, I can recommend two of my other stories that I'm working on at the moment, 'Expect the Unexpected' and 'Everything I Never Wanted'.

Anyway, enough about my stuff... I hope you update soon with a nice long chapter, I'll be waiting!

Drake- Draco Malfoy
Lucian- Lucius Malfoy



Anyone?

Ooh, nice chapter...but you could have went into more detail with the beheading of the vampire guy, was there blood? Did he burst into flames? Fall to the ground as a pile of dust?? I want to know...
You must update soonish! Ciao x

I did like this one... it was great :D Its good to see he's realising his feelings for Miranda... I want to see more of them together, and more of Drake as a vampire.

Great Chapter. I liked it :) Though I did find a couple things that were a bit off, lol.

Can stares erupt? I'm not so sure that they can, you put "Stares erupted around her as she entered the room..." Erupted is used more for sound, you like a room can erupt into applause- you know? But stares can't erupt, so maybe you should rething that whole sentence there. I'd give an example of how to rephrase it but I'm currently in 'braindead' mode and so I am of no help to anyone, lol.

oh and then you put...

"OK, breath you can do this." It's breathe, as in inhale and exhale, not what you put which is the breath as in bad breath, dog breath, smelly breath...hehe, you get the point I'm sure, so I'll shut up :)

Um, if you had any others I didn't see them.

I hope you update soon-ish, lol, as always!

Ciao x

Good chapter. I liked it. Update more soon?

Sincerely, H.P. Farmer

hey

o yummy drake in green!

hehe luvin the story kators nd i cant even remember my last reviews!! lol so yh wirte some more :P hehe

please for ur poorly sick sister!!

x lovedjah x

Yea! give his guitar a name! no, no kit yet... (i wish) i think youve done fine with that part so far...this chapter was kinda...nothing was happening but thats okay, it gave us some background on her personaitly and thats cool!