this is beautiful. I think everyone's felt like this at one time or another. I LOVE the last few lines. the flow is great, the rhyming awesome... it's just an amazing poem in general!

very ryhming. but everyone judges

even if they deny itfirst reactions can always be changed later into first smilesyay

wow, awfully enthusiastic for me

Wow. Puts you right into the thoughts of some random person. Awesome. Has an edge to it, which just adds to the awesomness of your writing. Sumthin is wrong with my comp, and i can't review your other poem, A world of our imagination, so here it is:

Very fantasy elemented, beautiful picture painted here. I'm gonna copy this one day, and make draw what i see, and somehow send it to you. Love it!

I'm loving your rhymes right now. This was especially cool because we all've thought about this before(at least I have)

Another great poem! This one flows really well and the rhyming is really good. Beautiful piece, well done! Vx

This was good, keep it up!

I hate when people just assume things it really sucks, I like this poem.