Thi was beautifully written. I love the emotion put into this and the realness of the thought process. This was a great read.

fantastic read! the short lines and the suspending lines have a great deal of emotion to express- as well as reinforcing drama, this poem is very indepth psychologically and marks off a state of mind perfectly. the 'shooting star' metaphor implies a brief passion, something disturbingly solemn and i truly am at awe at what u have created bye using such profound imagination!