Reviews for Cliches do NOT exist!

Reviews For: Cliches do NOT exist!

tiffanystar 2006-09-18 ch 1,	abuseok so u read my story so i decided to check out yours ... i must admit i like it you have a strong beg. and i also see its been what 5 months since you posted chp 1... are u going to continue if so let me know and ill cont. reading...thx for review by the way hopefully you will continue to read my story and enjoy it -tiffanystar
Imalefty 2006-09-08 ch 1,	abusethis is a promising plot. i agree - cliches don't exist. XD i would really have liked to know more details about your main character - what year of collge, what college, description, name...? all i really wonder now is... are you going to update? hopefully you will. keep writing! -Lefty
moonlit-corpse 2006-07-26 ch 1,	abusehey, ho! it's mOi, moonlit-corpse the author of the story "Why don't you kiss her?" i just dropped by to thank you for your review and also to take a peek at your work. it's a great start for a story love, but i wonder why you're having trouble updating. you're not a horrible author, believe me. and if it's not too bold or rude to say, if you feel a bit awkward about your conversations and stuff, why don't you get a beta? like me for instance? i'd only be too happy to help. as such, i already have an insane fascination with red pens and correcting people's literary work, even though, truth be told, i hardly ever have time to do it on my own work. shame that... but anyhoobles, what do you say? drop me a line if you need a beta or not! toodles!
risingofthebluesun 2006-07-25 ch 1, anon.	abuseAw. Are you going to ever update? Please please do! Thanks for your reviews! -Dawn
Phoenix-ofthe-Goldenrose 2006-07-24 ch 1,	abuseI wonder if she's finally going to adhere to the stepbrother cliche (unintentionally, of course). I love it that this story is basically making fun of cliches, because let's face it, there are a million cliches out there and they get kind of annoying after a while.
Mezmiro 2006-07-12 ch 1,	abuseI think you've been getting distracted lately. From what I understand, your story tells the tale of a girl dealing with cliches in her hopeless persuit of love. I think every cliche you have had in the past plays a small roll when compared to how these cliches are effecting your life in the present. If you write about the girl in present tense and make only a few references to cliches in the past, and develop the characters plot in the present, the story will come alive and the reader will be more interested. The cliches went on and on..but I really got interested when you talked about your mother's engagement. Perhaps you could broaden your horizons from what your title suggests..and talk about the life in which this person lives? More aspects of this life, at least.
Krirobe 2006-04-17 ch 1,	abuseI love the idea behind the story! I'm excited about reading the next chapter! Updating is a problem with me, too. I hated dialogue in the beginning, but once I got past that, I started to hate my sentence structure. If you ever need help with the transitions, just email me. Looking forward to meeting her mother's betrothed and, possibly, his son? Awkward or self-assured, only you can know.
Drops of Jewpiter 2006-04-17 ch 1,	abusegreat start- it's gonna b the stebbro one, isn't it? ~dropsofjewpiter~

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