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Reviews For: The First Kiss

Ramenluver
2008-01-27
ch 1,
abuseI really liked this. The analogies you used where colorful, and it kept my interest. Well done.

^_^

-Ramen

P.S. I'm currently trying to pimp out my story. lol If you get any time, will you check it out? It's called Unborn...
iLone
2008-01-02
ch 1,
abuseAw, sad! A bit hard to read, though...but nonetheless, good!
Irony's.Last.Words.Were
2006-04-17
ch 1,
abuseWow. It's deep, but not too describing. I lik eit. It's fast paced and real. It's cool. But how did they come to be in Paris? Who is the 'she' that made him sit next to her? How do they know each other?Can't wait for your next chapter! Update soon!

--Infraction of the Vassalaged Spirit
Sakura Rhiannon
2006-04-17
ch 1,
abuseI know all to well what that feels like... It's good, I like it.
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