this is beautiful. i love the way you described everything..

"But it’s ok the blind man said/

who’s heart died long ago/

For one man can not save the world/

though only one man tried"

so sad, but beautifully written. u really showed strong emotions thru ur words. good job and keep writing!

Woah, this is cool. I really like how you told a story in the poem. Great job. I got a good mental image of whats going on :)

Keep writing

Rhia

there was an eeriness to this...a raw almost confused honesty. you leave much to be thought about. nicely done. )

I'm - speechless. This is a work of genius (Yeah, no yeah no yeah. . . ) I-don't-know-what-to. . . DAMN IT! I LOVE IT! You're going on my fave author list. Beautiful, absolutely just HKHJGJFVHGFV!