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| Greyfox Cowgirl 2006-06-01 ch 2,   | And it continues... And it is good! Keep going. I want to know what's going to happen between these two. Greyfox |
| Guy-The-Wise 2006-05-19 ch 2, | O...chapter two...and just as great as chapter one...dont know what else to say...I'll be waiting for three |
| Lady Siobhan 2006-05-18 ch 2, | Wow, great chapter! I hope there will be more! This is a great story! PLEASE update!! :D |
| Lady Siobhan 2006-05-07 ch 1, | What a sweet story! I'd like to see some more, if you have something planned! Excellent work, keep it up!! :D |
| Guy-The-Wise 2006-04-18 ch 1, | Wow...lol, not much to say beyond that...supposed to use this to give suggestions...but I dont think I have any improvements...lol, just keep writing. I might have to get started again, just so you dont show me up...as bad :-P |
| Greyfox Cowgirl 2006-04-17 ch 1, | This was interesting to read. I won't say that you should continue. It's one of those that can hold out its own as is or can be made better (or worse) with more. I happen to like it as is though. Greyfox |