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| The Astronaut 2006-04-22 ch 1,  | abuseI read the first two lines and was already bored. Your rhymes are terrible, each word just there for the sake of the rhyme. To improve what you write, maybe you should try writing from your heart, not just writing to try to look "emo" and "deep". Just a thought. |
| pretty colors 2006-04-17 ch 1, | abusewow. thats a really deep poem. i am honestly in shock after reading it. that was beautiful and honest, but with a twist.i'm just wondering if this is supposed to be sympethetic to the raped, or the rapist...after all the one who is pitied is usually the victim...food for thought i supposeanyways wonderful poem |
| Arichos 2006-04-17 ch 1, | abuseWow. A lot of mixed emotion in this, sadness, hate, pity, regret. Very well written. Me like. Keep writing, and i hope no one flames you |