| Reviews for Five Men |
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Stars.Shining 3/17/09 . chapter 1Incredible! I really loved this. Wonderful description! I wish the 5th man had a special sentence that started out "He is a . . ." like the others. But other than that, this was phenomenal! :) |
Salkiethia 6/25/07 . chapter 1Really good writing for the first five men, but I think the bit about the last one could be stronger. It's a little too twisted to understand easily. |
account not in use 4/26/06 . chapter 1some typos in the last paragraph, they made me think I was cray-zay...beautiful story, it made my heart jump around. |