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Elizabeth Bilberry 2006-04-18 . chapter 1
This poem leaves me with a wistful feeling. Other's lives are too perfect, if you ask me. Wonderful imagery as always. Take care and keep writing.

EB
xoxoMizzatxoxo 2006-04-18 . chapter 1
Woah. Amazing. I loved the second to the last line.
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