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| The Darkest Night 2008-07-04 ch 4, | abuseomg you cant leave it like this!just when i was starting to like him...that was low even for him... please update i know you haven't for like 2 years but i have hope. ^^ |
| supersaiyanx 2008-06-27 ch 4, | abuseA great story! Update soon please! |
| Temple Trees 2008-04-25 ch 4, | abuseLove the story so far..but your lead male is such a dick! |
| dangerous attraction 2008-03-24 ch 4, | abuseWOAH. WOAH. WOAH... YOU can't stop there! Oh my god! I was getting so into it! and you haven't updated for, like, two years! :[ bummer. i guess this means you're not going to update again. i hope you do though... there's a tiny shimmer of hope, because this story is SO good so far. UPDATE PLEASE! |
| MelGrl 2007-08-08 ch 4, | abuseThis seems interesing, but I wonder if Cillian actually likes Lezlie or enjouys her pain. Please update soon! |
| Beybaska 2007-07-12 ch 4, anon. | abuseOh please oh please oh please update! I don't think I'll be able to live any longer with this cliffhanger!! OX |
| I Darkness 2007-07-11 ch 4, | abuseomg! you haven't finished the story? and its the best bit as well! i'm guessing Cillin and Lee are going to get together? but how?! tell me please??! oh yea and I added a comment on deviant art. find me as I-Darkness, as just as my name says here...I don't like to get confucing if you know what I mean! well hope you update soon and not torture us like all other writers do, by keeping us..in the dark! |
| urjellingcauseimevil 2007-05-14 ch 4, | abuseWHAT!1 HOW COULD U END IT RIGHT THERE.!? DO U WANT ME TO SUFFER!. because congratulations u got ur wish, |
| no account 2007-04-26 ch 4, anon. | abusei LOVE this story! i adore the love-hate dynamic between cillin and lezlie (wow, you must have a thing for oddly spelled names). i was not expecting cillin to be so deviously evil at the end there, so mean. i hope you continue this, but even if you don't these four chapters are quality. |
| calybe 2007-04-01 ch 4, | abuseAargh! You know in most stories the 'evil' dude is actually just merely annoying and way obviously in love with the girl. Cillin on the other hand...SO SO EVIL! Really, he deserves whatever Lez calls him. I can't believe he did that to his own best friend, no matter how much he dislikes her. And is there even a reason for all the dislike? Poor lezlie...I really like her. She's not the typical 'oh but he's so hott...but no mind stop it! I hate him! Hottness...cannot..resist!'. Er yeah. She's got quite a personality. |
| ham337dd 2007-03-12 ch 4, | abuseFunny story! I can’t stop giggling. I’m glad to see Aeric and Lezlie’s relationship ruined. I don’t like Aeric. Still, I admit what Cillin did was harsh! And scary how he managed to trick Aeric and Lezlie so suddenly! |
| firestar267 2007-03-04 ch 4, | abuseNo! That arse! This is so good! Please update soon! |
| keri 2007-01-22 ch 4, anon. | abuseooh, please update soon, i really want to see how all this ends up. I am kinda sad about Aeric and Lezlie, they were so cute. |
| Blinded.by.Stars 2007-01-20 ch 4, | abuseGAH! Cillin IS EVIL!! GASPS you have to update soon please? :) |
| jammi 2007-01-14 ch 4, | abusepoor Lezlie. Aeric, yeah, he's ... yeah. The fact that his friend had her pinned to the wall I mean, I don't know. Anyhoo, Cillin is such a jerk off. He might not like her but he doesn't have to ruin her. Honestly, poor thing. And now it's probably going to spread around the whole school. |