Amazing, incredible, fantastic poem.

like the last... is it 6(?), lines.. . this poem was really well written.

ouch, those last lines make me want to cringe. Really powerful.

You dont REALY self harm, do you iz?Because that would make me the less loved hte last lines..."I’m

One of those people

(saneless, brainless)

who always

bite

down

on broken teeth."

VERY GOOD POEM. (why can i never write anything like that?)

a very good poem!

You're a genius. SELF-WAR, BABY. (Fucking call me, I haven't seen you forever)

The actual physical structure of this poem is strange to me.

However, this doesn't change the fact that this poem is wonderfully written. Very well done.

interesting, albeit choppy. i don't really understand the line breaks, but i like the poem