wow that was good! it is so beautifully written. great job!

SarahJane

This is really good! Love how you've written this. Well done, great work! Vx

aw that's sweet (though i dont think i'd like a guy to drag me off). just a lil confused, do the townsppl feel betrayed, or they know they betrayed the girl? or did you mean it like a pun to go both ways? either way, i like it. -md-

very nice! i liked that a lot. it kind of reminds me of Beauty and The Beast. Great poem.