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| calybe 2006-07-28 ch 5,   | You know, you never review my stuff. I am so boviously the nicer sister from the two. ANYWAYS, your sarcasticness is coming out in this chapter. Proof: "Ah. Shall we forget momentarily that you already are one then?" Hehe, I liked this line: 'Sir Talkalot grinned a grin of a Cheshire cat'. I can grin a grin of a Cheshire cat too! |
| The Flying Chocolate Bar 2006-07-07 ch 3, | The Blacksmith character was awesome, if you try to write a funny story make it funny!! That actually made me laugh!! |
| wizzie192 2006-05-14 ch 4, | This is very cute and funny. I liked it! Keep writing more! |
| Rabia 2006-05-12 ch 3, | Stroke of genius!! I love it! I absolutely love it! keep on going with it! This has to be a masterpiece to top all masterpieces! yes i like periwinkle that way too! And dont make it to serious! Keep the mood light, like it has been now! I love you! |
| Rabia 2006-05-12 ch 4, | I was telling Seher the other day that she would kill me by 'tarpa-ing' me so much. I say the same to you. mujhay tarpa tarpa kar maarna hai? post up the entire story! quick!'i'm literally dying in anticipation about what happens next! I like Sir Sleepalot. I am practising turning into him... in fact, I dont need to practice. I think he must be in my family tree somewhere! I absolutely love it! |
| calybe 2006-05-12 ch 4, | I decided to review because I am that awesome. Although, I already told you what I thought in real life so that leaves me with nothing to say. Except: It should have been 'a chicken crossed the road'. That would have been cooler and more intriguing! You could have said Hmm...why did the chicken cross the road? dun dun dun! Adios Amigo! |
| Ame Megami 2006-04-25 ch 3, | Ha ha! I think I would die if I was a knight and had to wear pink armour! Very good, keep it up! ~Ame~ |
| fire-breathing-kitten 2006-04-22 ch 2, | This is hilarious! I love the names Sir Sleepalot and Sir Talkalot, love them. If I were in some kind of danger, I would want knights with names like THAT to rescue me. I kind of wonder how they get anything accomplished when they're all busy sleeping and/or talking, but...that's probably not the point here. |
| Ame Megami 2006-04-22 ch 2, | Excellent. I like this story very much! Please continue, I will be reading! ~Ame~ |
| Orrionna 2006-04-20 ch 1, | sleepy or caffeen high, the story was well said. I admit, while the two knights are interacting, I couldn't tell where they were. I pictured them in a forest, untill a giant bursts in on them. Sounds cool. I'm adding this to my favorites anyway. Can't wait to see what the giant wants. |
| Diabolos 2006-04-18 ch 1, | i shall introducee ye poor soul to a PRO doctor when i get baq. meanwhile ill pray for the remainin sanity of ye well beaten up head. *praypray* |