Hey! Awe, that was sad but really good!! ^-^Thats the perfect poem for some of the fictions I've come across. I have to mention this to some people!!Anyway, just wanted to say, I think ya did an awesome job with this poem. I cant really write poems. I have tried but to no avail...(darn it!)

Hey, I remember this one! I like this one, it's very well-written. Great work!

Sweet, great poem, I felt for that little girl, its similar to the sort of thing I like to see and write, something emotional about character who is sad and alone, which might by why I love John Clare's poetry, this is one of those poems

First off let me compliment you on your awsome summary, the title didn't really apeal to me but that summary tugged me in. And good thing it did, i loved this, Definitly one of me favorites. You got talent my friend, I look foward to reading more work by you.