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| roosakissu 2008-07-06 ch 1,  | abusehuh this was disturbing, I really got chills reading this, ohoh, somewhat disgusting, I almost could feels the pain she had to go trough doing all that to herself... And damn I wanted to make mincemeat out of the boy, how sick can one be?! Yeah I can't understand such things, I guess I am narrow minded like that... But it was still beautiful, in a very disturbing kind of way... |
| The.Vampire.Doll. 2008-07-05 ch 1, | abuseyes! he does still luv her! |
| Reminising Obsession 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseDAMN!Scuse my french!But...shoot!Thats so messed up!But unexpected and good!Stupid boy for being...so evil!And stupid girl 4 being soo Stupid!Nice 1 shot! |
| rachely 2008-05-23 ch 1, | abusethat was so mean. why would he make her do that? omg. good writing though. :) |
| Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abusemalicious... Brilliant but Twisted... |
| Pieces of the sun 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseHow...chillingly beautiful. And twisted to the max. Why is it that when you write anything it sounds so deep and cool but when I try it, it sounds like a pre-teen on crack who is trying to be poetic? |
| Bleeding White Lily 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseWow this was short. So were you trying to give out a message with this? Not to destroy yourself for a man? Nice message if it is. Some girls can be so stupid and some guys can be suck jackas*s. Good job. |
| emrevolemina 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuseHe is crazy |
| pheonixorion10 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseok that was rreally rreally confusing im guessin he didnt still love her but knowing me im probaly wrong (sigh) |
| somuchformyhappyending 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abusewow...that was brilliant. |
| Boo 2007-12-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseemm...I didn't understand a single thing |
| oh geez 2007-11-28 ch 1, anon. | abusethe little fuck. i would've hurt him |
| candykillz 2007-11-25 ch 1, | abusedamn! this story is disturbing. it got to me. the girl is stupid for doing that to herself. its a nice story, nicely written too. your very creative. |
| yv 2007-09-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseOH MY GOD. this is just a tad disturbing. and why february? |
| Barukisu 2007-04-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's frighteningly morbid. |