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| xRayne 2006-04-18 ch 1, | (('breathe' should be 'breath')) That was really awesome! Great job! Keep it up! |
| GirlxAnachronism 2006-04-18 ch 1, | :( Sad. But it was really good, lots of details. awsome job |
| Smoky Bear 2006-04-18 ch 1, | tried that once (never coming down) found that you have to eventually. the thyme and metre is considered and it evident that you have given thought to how this sounds. there's a typo in there but otherwise good work. |