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Reviews For: Falling, Falling, Falling

xRayne
2006-04-18
ch 1,
(('breathe' should be 'breath'))

That was really awesome! Great job! Keep it up!
GirlxAnachronism
2006-04-18
ch 1,
:( Sad. But it was really good, lots of details. awsome job
Smoky Bear
2006-04-18
ch 1,
tried that once (never coming down) found that you have to eventually. the thyme and metre is considered and it evident that you have given thought to how this sounds. there's a typo in there but otherwise good work.
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