Reviews for Mechanoid Five - FictionPress.com

KuroKage1717 2007-10-06 ch 3,	wow...an extremely different story idea. i like it.
Delo 2006-05-30 ch 1,	Wow. Very good. The authour has clearly matured incredibly quickly from his last novels. This is on the level of Artamis Fowl, though a bit more violent (it may require a 12 rating next to the strong but comforting dose of humour).This ladies and gentelmen is a page turner and if the rest of the novel moves at this pace and maintains the hilarious dialogue, then count me in for a subscription.
Kael 2006-05-12 ch 1,	nice
Jadis 2006-05-03 ch 1,	"‘Alice Johnsen?’ I asked the gothic young woman before she nodded and dramatically fainted. Seeing as how I had just demolished someone’s head with my knee, it was reasonable." reasonable indeed... lol did I mention you crack me up? the hopeless romantic in me is furiously sniffing out a soulful connection between dear mechanoid and alice... Do I see love on the horizon? very amusing and touching. I particularly liked your beginning, the whole, what follows here today is a true story...etc. the "No, you wont be told you." was a bit awkward... were you going for "no you wont be told who?" eh thats all i could spot on a first read through... lovely as usual though, I do hope you continue it...
Poppy Pyres 2006-04-19 ch 1,	Cool. I like the pace that you maintain- the action is consistent...look fwd to reading more.Take care