I think I know where this fic was inspired from! And its very good. Now, your making me jealous! Cuz you can write fics and poems! ^o^;

:o You are very good at writing poetry, Helen! ^_^ This poem is kinda sad... But very good. And I think I know who this poem is about... Brilliant work!

Hey Helen, nice job you did their, felt like it came deep within, and well leaving Kieren was a smart thing, I can't stand 3 seconds with the guy. I like how you have written something out of your own emotions and kept a regular rhytmn and a rhyme.

'I finally made my decision to end A relationship that I couldn’t pretend'-wow, great ending line. I love it. I'm glad that horrible relationship has ended and wish you the best. Awsome job.