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| Loveless To Self 2006-05-22 ch 1, | this is horrible in the sense it came from your self-esteem. it's well written and all, but cheer up! nobody can resist someone who writes as good as you, and I'm sure you're very dateable. P.S. let's see some happy poems! |
| XX Bleeding Crystal XX 2006-04-28 ch 1, | Goodness, Lita, this is just so good... Gah, lotsa feelings right now!! I'll just say I loved it! Loves! Kaleb |
| WinterInTheAttic 2006-04-19 ch 1, | Aw, I like it. The feelings of yearning and desire were very well portrayed. Nice work! |
| Rhianika 2006-04-18 ch 1, | Aw, thats a really nice poem. I like how you connected the end back up to the begining. It made the poem feel complete. Also the repetition was really nicely done too. Good feeling in it. Great job :) Keep writing ~Rhia |
| Little Junkie 2006-04-18 ch 1, | why cant people just be themselves and be happy with that? and why dont people go after what they want and be more outgoing? god damn angsty people. no ones going to look at you or like you if you think your ugly and dont talk to anyone. |