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Alena D'Etoiles
2006-11-10
ch 1,
abuseHAHAHA! I loved your summary. It made me laugh. Lol. I laugh at random things. Lol again. Kay, I liked your poem. Lol lol lol. I'm still laughing...I think it's time for me to go to bed.
multiples of six
2006-04-20
ch 1,
abuseThis is gorgeous. It has a good rhythm to it, and all the repetition ("a place" at the beginning of each stanza, "so-something" in the first lines, and "the place" at the end) is really nice. It's really good, nice job =)
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