Painful and grasping. This is an interesting representation.

Saddening, how society is reaching this point..a very clear picture you have here, and a wonderful piece at that.

The imagery of "throwing up your hair" in the context of eating disorders... is disturbing. I wish I had your skill for expressing things in so few words... and still remainin chrystal clear!

Wow, this really well done. I can totally see how it relates to anorexia, but in a really...abstract(?) kind of way. It's really cool though. It's awesome like that.

Rock on!

Hmn... It took me a minute to get all of the references, I think. Again, nice ending. You always seem to make the ends have the most impact in a way that defies logic.

good poem, i like it. keep up the good work.

Nice poem. I'm not annorexic, but I have a friend that is, and I've talked to her a lot about it. Great job describing the feelings. Nicely done.

Keep writing,

~Rhia