 Osunale 2006-07-27 . chapter 1Painful and grasping. This is an interesting representation. |
 ThisCut-UpAngel 2006-05-09 . chapter 1Saddening, how society is reaching this point..a very clear picture you have here, and a wonderful piece at that. |
 Noetic 2006-04-29 . chapter 1The imagery of "throwing up your hair" in the context of eating disorders... is disturbing. I wish I had your skill for expressing things in so few words... and still remainin chrystal clear! |
 Shiori-san 2006-04-25 . chapter 1Wow, this really well done. I can totally see how it relates to anorexia, but in a really...abstract(?) kind of way. It's really cool though. It's awesome like that.
Rock on! |
 CerriC 2006-04-20 . chapter 1Hmn... It took me a minute to get all of the references, I think. Again, nice ending. You always seem to make the ends have the most impact in a way that defies logic. |
 Cloudsinthesky 2006-04-18 . chapter 1good poem, i like it. keep up the good work. |
 Rhianika 2006-04-18 . chapter 1Nice poem. I'm not annorexic, but I have a friend that is, and I've talked to her a lot about it. Great job describing the feelings. Nicely done.
Keep writing,
~Rhia |