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Reviews For: One Way Thin

Osunale
2006-07-27
ch 1,
abusePainful and grasping. This is an interesting representation.
ThisCut-UpAngel
2006-05-09
ch 1,
abuseSaddening, how society is reaching this point..a very clear picture you have here, and a wonderful piece at that.
Noetic
2006-04-29
ch 1,
abuseThe imagery of "throwing up your hair" in the context of eating disorders... is disturbing. I wish I had your skill for expressing things in so few words... and still remainin chrystal clear!
Shiori-san
2006-04-25
ch 1,
abuseWow, this really well done. I can totally see how it relates to anorexia, but in a really...abstract(?) kind of way. It's really cool though. It's awesome like that.

Rock on!
CerriC
2006-04-20
ch 1,
abuseHmn... It took me a minute to get all of the references, I think. Again, nice ending. You always seem to make the ends have the most impact in a way that defies logic.
Cloudsinthesky
2006-04-18
ch 1,
abusegood poem, i like it. keep up the good work.
Rhianika
2006-04-18
ch 1,
abuseNice poem. I'm not annorexic, but I have a friend that is, and I've talked to her a lot about it. Great job describing the feelings. Nicely done.

Keep writing,

~Rhia
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