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| Osunale 2006-07-27 ch 1,  | abusePainful and grasping. This is an interesting representation. |
| ThisCut-UpAngel 2006-05-09 ch 1, | abuseSaddening, how society is reaching this point..a very clear picture you have here, and a wonderful piece at that. |
| Noetic 2006-04-29 ch 1, | abuseThe imagery of "throwing up your hair" in the context of eating disorders... is disturbing. I wish I had your skill for expressing things in so few words... and still remainin chrystal clear! |
| Shiori-san 2006-04-25 ch 1, | abuseWow, this really well done. I can totally see how it relates to anorexia, but in a really...abstract(?) kind of way. It's really cool though. It's awesome like that. Rock on! |
| CerriC 2006-04-20 ch 1, | abuseHmn... It took me a minute to get all of the references, I think. Again, nice ending. You always seem to make the ends have the most impact in a way that defies logic. |
| Cloudsinthesky 2006-04-18 ch 1, | abusegood poem, i like it. keep up the good work. |
| Rhianika 2006-04-18 ch 1, | abuseNice poem. I'm not annorexic, but I have a friend that is, and I've talked to her a lot about it. Great job describing the feelings. Nicely done. Keep writing, ~Rhia |