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| One-Hand Clap 2008-04-19 ch 1,   | The imagery in this is amazing, I loved it. The picture that rests in my mind's eye is of those two lonely, dead roses straining and wilting from the cracks of the broken vase. Lovely! Superb! I cannot find one thing wrong with this. I love the way I can basically feel the emotion pulsating from the screen, which is something you rarely feel with haikus! You've done an amazing job! - Clap Trap, from Review Marathon [link in my profile] |
| Enigmatic Night 2007-03-14 ch 1, | Quite simply the imagery is very stark and quite symbolic. Nicely written. |
| Morwain 2006-04-26 ch 1, | my favorite haiku you've written so far good job |
| Needa S 2006-04-26 ch 1, | Cool! Awesome write. |
| happypills03 2006-04-19 ch 1, | going through a Haiku faise?... all of ur poems are very good.. another masterpiece added to the list of greatness :) keep up the good work |
| Faithless Juliet 2006-04-18 ch 1, | I like the image of this being all that's left of them. Juliet. |