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Reviews For: An Ode to Matthew Lombardi

TAD
2006-12-03
ch 1,
haha.

so you got away with the rhyming. congratulations, din. :)

oh, and thanks for the review. :)
E.B. Keane-Farrell
2006-04-20
ch 1,
That was a good poem, but long. I liked it, but remember: you don't have to put a comma at the end of every line :P
Vivus Tabula.
2006-04-20
ch 1,
Even though I read this a long time ago (LIKE A WHOLE AGE) its still good and i think that ur way to obssesed with ML ok... wait never mind... MH ARWEN!

1 more!
FlamingDoritos
2006-04-19
ch 1,
Only slightly crazed. :picks up torch:

BACK! BACK I SAY!
icycheetos
2006-04-18
ch 1,
i'm i the first one...YAY!! hallelujah, guess what, i like PIE and pizariamango m mangos. manga is the feminene form of a mango! isn't that great? RIGHT the poam, the poam, yes. let's see. OH NO! I'M NOT THE FIRST TO REVIEW! ohhohohoho. what's an ode? an oboe? flute? piccilo? pickles? jellybeans? PRINTERS! YAY FOR PRINTERS! strawberry yogurt? i thought it was strawberry berry berri very punchy like PUNCH! what? I DON'T REMEMBER! OH NO I'M GONNA DIE! I HAVE SHORT TERM MEMORY LOSS. did you know that? i didn't know that, that's cuz i have short term memory loss. guess what! i made you brunch, and then i vacummed your floors, and then i ate your brunch because i'm a hungry hungry hipPO! hungry hungry hipPOS! monkeys are evil. who the heck is tinker? tinker bell? navi? link? the DEKU TREE! GASP! you're having an affair with the deku tree?? how could you do that to your family?? your name has been stained, like a stained glass window. or a statue, a sexy statue, with METAL ARMPITS! oh the glory! are you going to give this poem to matthew lombardi if you do actually go to lunch with the flames with what her face's rich uncle? i don't think so. i could do it for you if you're nervous! i'll say A FRIEND OF MINE WROTE THIS AFTER DRINKING 56 CANS OF PEPSI AND 2 COKES. THE END. though i think you should do it yourself. that would be smart. like SMARTIES! m, m and m's are better! how the heck do you write m and me? me? ME? IT WAS ME? HOW COULD I? dumpster dumpster man! i want to be a dumpster man. is this getting too long...I DON'T CARE! so what's up? pie. no silly, THE SKY! it's very blue, like the sea. UNDER THE SEA, WHERE IT IS WETTER...I FORGET THE WORDS, LET'S SING leleleelslslakdjfaifkd and oh my gosh i just realized i have school tomorrow!@ well...my brain JUST exploded right now, SO i shall leave you to your pickle..or oboe, poam! is poam spelled with an a or an e? all i know is i always get it wrong, YOU JUST SIGNED IN?? WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN? hey you're talking to me! i shall now go do...something with my life. i need a life. FEED ME!
Tinker
2006-04-18
ch 1,
Nice...just nice, i mean, you are really in LOVE
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