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| Melerna 2006-05-13 ch 1,   | That made me feel sad and reminiscent. Heh. Short, but sweet. This feels, to me, somewhat bitter and full of what you mention here- 'longing'. I understand what I get from that poem, although possibly not the poem itself. -Drasi |
| Etherealia 2006-04-19 ch 1, | I love how concise and simple this poem is--it hit my heart to the core. Nice work! |