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| The Postscript 2007-12-01 ch 10,  | abuseReally great. You address a lot of central themes - freedom versus confinement, life versus death, past versus present, good verses evil. It's a lot sometimes . . . and it is something that we need to analyze closer. I think this series always helps the reader do that. Keep writing, k. |
| The Postscript 2007-09-02 ch 9, | abuseReally great write. I like all the imagery assosiated with the development of the story. One little thing I noticed - "The clock is ticking, and I am hunger for revenge" should be "The clock is ticking, and I am hungry for revenge". Awesome job - keep writing. k. |
| The Postscript 2007-06-03 ch 8, | abuseWonderful. I hope it is not disrespectful to you if I say this reminds me of something out of the movies ... one of those battle scenes you have managed to capture in writing. Beautiful work. Keep writing, k. |
| The Postscript 2007-05-13 ch 7, | abuseAMAZING images - especially at the beginning. Wow. Really awesome work. Keep writing! God bless, k. |
| The Postscript 2006-09-04 ch 6, | abuseAmazing - I love the language and emotion. It is so pure and yet so mature and insightful. Awesome work. Keep writing, s. |
| The Postscript 2006-06-23 ch 5, | abuseAmazing images. Astounding. This is true writing. I especially loved that bit - "as the fragile of the eyes, . . ." Great work. Keep writing, s. |
| Princess-anna57 2006-05-27 ch 1, | abuseWow. And you reckon my work is good? I'm speechless! Excellent work! Thanks for your reviews! Keep writing! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| The Postscript 2006-05-26 ch 4, | abuseAmazing images. Stunning. Keep writing. |
| The Postscript 2006-05-14 ch 3, | abuseWonderful images...this collection continues to amaze me with the exquisite ideas! Keep writing, s. |
| The Postscript 2006-05-10 ch 2, | abuseDelicate, beautiful language but a hard topic. I find something in this piece that touches my soul. Keep writing. |
| The Postscript 2006-04-19 ch 1, | abuseWow...that is...deep. It's funny, because health teachers I've had always do this excersie - look in the mirror and write down how we see ourselves. This could almost be something like that. I love the imagery and description, and once again I find a small piece of myself in this poem. Nice work. Keep writing. |