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The Postscript
2007-12-01
ch 10,
abuseReally great. You address a lot of central themes - freedom versus confinement, life versus death, past versus present, good verses evil. It's a lot sometimes . . . and it is something that we need to analyze closer. I think this series always helps the reader do that. Keep writing, k.
The Postscript
2007-09-02
ch 9,
abuseReally great write. I like all the imagery assosiated with the development of the story. One little thing I noticed - "The clock is ticking, and I am hunger for revenge" should be "The clock is ticking, and I am hungry for revenge". Awesome job - keep writing. k.
The Postscript
2007-06-03
ch 8,
abuseWonderful. I hope it is not disrespectful to you if I say this reminds me of something out of the movies ... one of those battle scenes you have managed to capture in writing. Beautiful work. Keep writing, k.
The Postscript
2007-05-13
ch 7,
abuseAMAZING images - especially at the beginning. Wow. Really awesome work. Keep writing! God bless, k.
The Postscript
2006-09-04
ch 6,
abuseAmazing - I love the language and emotion. It is so pure and yet so mature and insightful. Awesome work. Keep writing, s.
The Postscript
2006-06-23
ch 5,
abuseAmazing images. Astounding. This is true writing. I especially loved that bit - "as the fragile of the eyes, . . ." Great work. Keep writing, s.
Princess-anna57
2006-05-27
ch 1,
abuseWow. And you reckon my work is good? I'm speechless! Excellent work! Thanks for your reviews! Keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^
The Postscript
2006-05-26
ch 4,
abuseAmazing images. Stunning. Keep writing.
The Postscript
2006-05-14
ch 3,
abuseWonderful images...this collection continues to amaze me with the exquisite ideas! Keep writing, s.
The Postscript
2006-05-10
ch 2,
abuseDelicate, beautiful language but a hard topic. I find something in this piece that touches my soul. Keep writing.
The Postscript
2006-04-19
ch 1,
abuseWow...that is...deep. It's funny, because health teachers I've had always do this excersie - look in the mirror and write down how we see ourselves. This could almost be something like that. I love the imagery and description, and once again I find a small piece of myself in this poem. Nice work. Keep writing.
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