Really great. You address a lot of central themes - freedom versus confinement, life versus death, past versus present, good verses evil. It's a lot sometimes . . . and it is something that we need to analyze closer. I think this series always helps the reader do that. Keep writing, k.

Really great write. I like all the imagery assosiated with the development of the story. One little thing I noticed - "The clock is ticking, and I am hunger for revenge" should be "The clock is ticking, and I am hungry for revenge". Awesome job - keep writing. k.

Wonderful. I hope it is not disrespectful to you if I say this reminds me of something out of the movies ... one of those battle scenes you have managed to capture in writing. Beautiful work. Keep writing, k.

AMAZING images - especially at the beginning. Wow. Really awesome work. Keep writing! God bless, k.

Amazing - I love the language and emotion. It is so pure and yet so mature and insightful. Awesome work. Keep writing, s.

Amazing images. Astounding. This is true writing. I especially loved that bit - "as the fragile of the eyes, . . ." Great work. Keep writing, s.

Wow. And you reckon my work is good? I'm speechless! Excellent work! Thanks for your reviews! Keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^

Amazing images. Stunning. Keep writing.

Wonderful images...this collection continues to amaze me with the exquisite ideas! Keep writing, s.

Delicate, beautiful language but a hard topic. I find something in this piece that touches my soul. Keep writing.

Wow...that is...deep. It's funny, because health teachers I've had always do this excersie - look in the mirror and write down how we see ourselves. This could almost be something like that. I love the imagery and description, and once again I find a small piece of myself in this poem. Nice work. Keep writing.