I like how short it is. Any more explanation, and an explanation for what a secret was wouldn't be a secret anymore!

Wow! I like it! It's short but really nice.

beautiful.

Interesting, like your choice of last line especially. Well done x

Thank you for the review you sent to me, however, I have forgotten who you are. I sincerely apologize for my lack of brain activity and short term memory. Could you help a lost reader remember who you are? Its been a year since I've been here. Please? I know it'd help me, and perhaps if I do by chance recall who you are, it may perhaps make you smile.

I especially love that last line, wonderful job.

yeah, that really describes secrecy well! And, lol, I had to go to Microsoft word and look up the word "rife" in the thesaurus! Ha, ha, I've got a pretty good vocab, but I still got a lotta words to learn! Ha, ha, because of this Haiku, I learned a new word! THANK YOU! lol _

nice work. you canged your name, i just spent half an hour trying to find your page i was getting very confused.

still received an image despite the number of words. great job :)

Good haiku. Very, very well done. Keep writing!

Anna

i like this. i dont know, but i got a really vivid picture of something close to me. anyway, good job. good luck with/i hope you had luck with the hospital thing.

Nice work!