 ladybow8 2007-06-11 . chapter 1I like how short it is. Any more explanation, and an explanation for what a secret was wouldn't be a secret anymore! |
 dex2468 2006-07-03 . chapter 1Wow! I like it! It's short but really nice. |
 E.S. Lundgren 2006-06-15 . chapter 1beautiful. |
 elvenstorm 2006-06-14 . chapter 1Interesting, like your choice of last line especially. Well done x |
 lyricalprose 2006-05-25 . chapter 1 Thank you for the review you sent to me, however, I have forgotten who you are. I sincerely apologize for my lack of brain activity and short term memory. Could you help a lost reader remember who you are? Its been a year since I've been here. Please? I know it'd help me, and perhaps if I do by chance recall who you are, it may perhaps make you smile. |
 classic violet 2006-05-24 . chapter 1I especially love that last line, wonderful job. |
 shinco 2006-05-10 . chapter 1yeah, that really describes secrecy well! And, lol, I had to go to Microsoft word and look up the word "rife" in the thesaurus! Ha, ha, I've got a pretty good vocab, but I still got a lotta words to learn! Ha, ha, because of this Haiku, I learned a new word! THANK YOU! lol ^_^ |
 eraced 2006-05-01 . chapter 1nice work. you canged your name, i just spent half an hour trying to find your page i was getting very confused. |
 Spare Change 2006-05-01 . chapter 1still received an image despite the number of words. great job :) |
 Princess-anna57 2006-04-24 . chapter 1Good haiku. Very, very well done. Keep writing!
~Anna~ |
 boys kiss girls 2006-04-19 . chapter 1i like this. i dont know, but i got a really vivid picture of something close to me. anyway, good job. good luck with/i hope you had luck with the hospital thing. |
 Shara G. 2006-04-19 . chapter 1Nice work! |