I really like this story. For the longest time I thought they would get beack together. It's nice to see that a story can be written without it ending with the picture perfect Happily Ever After but can still end well.

jessica

I know I am unreasonable but I soo wanted Chris and Warren back together so I am a little dissappointed. But that doesn't distract from the greatness that is your story. Awesome writing and plot development. Brava!!

Seems like I'm not the only one here who wants Chris and Warren back together and dammit i know your version of ending is more realistic but this is a story,, you don't have to be realistic!! Gah. It's not that it ruined the entire story or what, just ** me a bit, but i guess i'm just a little exagerating here. Update for TGMM soon, please!!

okay, so i realize you finished this like a year ago, but i just thought i'd comment.
huh. i just finished reading what you have of the gay man's matchmaker - is it over, by the way? i wasn't completely sure - and i was so surprised how much chris had changed from there, to here. he seems like a complete ** tbh, haha, and warren seems like a sweetie. so, kinda changed my perspective there. heh.
anyways, yeah. (:

Um...wow. That was rather harsh...(Not that you can really blame Warren, but that seemed a little out of character)

I love your story by the way :)

Wow, I really did enjoy reading this story. I love the character development, and at first, I felt sympathetic towards Warren. Then he became a dick, and I started rooting for "Team Chris". lol I really did want Warren and Chris to end up together though. I mean, I'm glad they're happy and all, but goddammit, I'm a sucker for cliche endings. The actual ending is more realistic though, so I guess I have to give you props for that. Amazing writing and can't wait for updates on TGMM!

OMG! I can't believe you ended it like this! Not saying that it wasn't great or anything but I really wanted Warren and Chris back together! Well at least they're happy.

I haven't read any of the other reviewer's thoughts but I was really really hoping that Chris and Warren would get back together. I kept waiting and waiting for Warren to fall in love when he moved to New York but not romantic interests showed up so I thought that he would somehow get back together with Chris. AT first I was against the idea because I didn't feel Chris deserved it but as i saw him change, I was really really hoping they would re-kindle.

I really liked your story, however, I didn't quite bought the 180 degree change in Chris. He was a cocky bastard and then he suddenly (well, not SO suddenly but still) became this guy who teared up with emotions and and was all shy and unsure of himself. I had a hard time buying that.

this is good

Honestly.
I'm disappointed.
Which is so sad, since I'm a fan of some of your other pieces. I just find it unfair that all the holes you left unresolved in this story are filled in, in another story. I get that there were parts of cross over, but this is still a story in and of itself, so it should have a complete ending. -- It didn't. I shouldn't have to read a whole new story to get the ending for this one. It's unfair.
Besides the unfair ending, I disliked how severely their characters changed. Chris' radical change reminded me of the bully in Brian's Story, who changed to be a loving sensitive character. It seems a bit, unrealistic to me?
I loved your style, even if it lacked in detail at some points. No one is perfect, and you are a far better writer than me, by a long shot. I love that Warren and Chris didn't end up together. I dislike predicable endings. Because I, as many others, expected them to get together.
I think you do good work. The fact that you write about homosexuality only adds to your 'amazingness'. It's still surprisingly an issue for modern American's to see to people of the same gender kissing, which sickens me. I love that you not only get a chance to write because it's what you enjoy, but I love that you also are taking a stand while you do it.
Even if I was unhappy with some aspects of this story, I still enjoyed the read and thought it was an amazing piece of fiction. Keep writing. You have real talent, as I'm sure you're well aware. ;)
I'll continue to peruse your small library of published works.

Keep it up. =D

Hi! I read this story one go, because I'm new to fiction press. The story is very nice written. The storyline is great! The starting is very nice and captive. The ending is very realistic. I didn't expect the ending, really. But it's what life is about right? But I tell you this, it's good enough to make me skip work the other day. Congratulation for this wonderful story. One of my favourite!

amazing story! i couldn't stop reading it!! i look forward to reading more of ur work soon!

You're right. It was good to end there. It felt... final.
I'm glad that Warren and Chris finally got over their differences.
:K
Bloodfeeder

i'd have done the same as warren
Chris was such a prick
he deserves it

i've read the story in just one night and i really liked the story but for the ending, i wasnt completly satisfied. like what the others said i think warren and chris should have gotten back together because they now learned there lesson and plus they really look good together. i really hate jake coz he's really a bad influ on warren. and sam wasnt really part of the story so i think please make warren and sam together again for they deserved it. please please. i really dont like this feeling when this kinds of endings happen. please think about it. please please.