pretty and painful (in a good way, somehow). the last lines are beautiful.

Love the poem, format, everythingBeautiful piece!

I love the flow of this. I can really relate to this, telling the same thing over and over again, only to have it ignored and the same questions asked all over again.

Keep it up.

This runs nicely. I like the 6th y 7th line.

I like how it's laid out. Nice flow to it too.