Uwah this was so cute and sweet that I'm getting a sugar rush *giggles like mad* XD

Your writing has a humorous tone, I love that XD You just went a little overboard with the italics and sometimes used them on the wrong word.

I'd like to know more about how the characters look like though, because somehow I get the feeling that it's rather important to the story. Also, I don't get anything about the world it's set in. But ah well that didn't really matter XD

Since this is fantasy like, I guess you're not that strict with the fact that real albino people don't have pink or red eyes and that their eyesight is lowered XD But Makura kinda reminded me of a bunny XD So cute!

WAHAHA Loved the ending tsk tsk. It's the lil perv inside that sneaks up and grabs hold of the keyboard eh?