Why does every story I read have a classmate name in it! Well the story has a non-stop pace and quirkness of the characters make it seem like this romance will turn out to be more than just that. And that assumption has been correct. The angels and demons make this a perfect romance infused war with a slight hint of humor. There is one flaw if you don't mind me saying so the characters aren't written clearly though. It took me a little while to imagine what the characters were like but when I imagine them perfectly they ae one of the funniest and most quriky I have ever ead about(Speaking of which can I have a chibi Adrian Plushie? I really like his character!+3(Squee). Keep this up a story like this one is worth a 8.5/10

The all bold is annoying. I think I read this sometime before, but I don't remember it, so I'm reading the whole thing again.

Good so far. I'd say to try to make stuff happen a bit faster, but that could be considered faintly hypocritical.

By the way, I like the name.

Good story it's cute.

Can't wait ot read more.

-Crimson Ara

Very entertaining, me like. Adrian is kinda stalkerish, but still kool^^ I request that you continue for the sake of curiousity(sp?)! Good story^^

Jeez, so good! Adrian seems hot! LOL! Black hair guys are awesome! Anyway please hurry and update! :)

CayRae-SkySong

o_O ADRIAN SOUNDS SEXXI!! update soon!

Interesting, I really like Riley, she seems so relateable. Great job, cant wait until the next chapter!

Not bad, not bad. That guy's a weird one.

Suggestions:

Having the entire chapter in bold is a little ** the eyes ^_^;;

Also, make sure there is a new line each time a new person speaks. Then again, it could have been an uploading problem.

Anyway, that's the only thing constructive I have to say.

Hope you continue ^_^

Cassie

Hmm. What a creepy guy.

I'm up for some creepiness!

interesting...odd enough, my name is Riley as well, thugh most other things about us differ apart from the whole, being ignored thing...lol

I wanna read more, so write! WRITE! I might have to spork you if you don't...MUHAHAHA! *brandishes spork*

-Slipping Fears