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| ihrtbks 2007-06-21 ch 1,  | abuseAmusing. He's thinking about the color of her eyes...cute. Love the last part, I love you; I love you too. GREAT JOB! |
| Greyfox Cowgirl 2006-04-30 ch 1, | abuseThey're so nice to each other. lol |
| cbprice25 2006-04-21 ch 1, | abuseI like it. |
| rk 2006-04-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseHuh? |
| Joyful Girl in the Mirror 2006-04-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is so utterly simplistic. I love it. I'm such a sap. Good job! |
| BAmm 2006-04-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw... thats really cute. I like it.but it reminds me of the late night talks my sister has with her boyfriend. I can hear them from my room. God they're sickening. Ew. But this is really sweet. I like it. |